https://youtu.be/hphQ98RS6n0
I got mostly positive feedback from my last elevator pitch. The feedback that stood out to me was the fact that i need to project more and put more passion into some of my words.
I tried to be louder and a little less monotone in this pitch however I don't think there is a drastic difference. This is something i struggle with during presentations and I will continue to work on it in the future. I also think my hand placement/movement was a bit better in this pitch than the last one.
Hey Eric, great job on this assignment! I agree that you probably still need to project more and speak more with your hands. The great speakers throughout history were speakers of passion, not comedy. To project this, bang your fists and wave your arms to add emphasis!
ReplyDeleteAlong with this, make sure to always be looking at the audience and engaging them as much as possible. Keep up the good work! (this part got deleted when I published)
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