https://youtu.be/nmcFGo6WlVk
The feedback i received from last class included the possibility of adding a paper trading aspect to my investment curriculum. There was no unhelpful or silly feedback. The other feedback I received included approval of my business idea.
I incorporated this paper trading aspect and I also specified that the textbook I would be creating will be an E-book. One thing I still need to work on in my pitch is the placement of my hands, especially at the beginning.
Hi Sean,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very informative and it hit all the right points. Having two step curriculum will allow help students so much with learning the information first then being able apply it. The only critic I have is maybe walking around and projecting your voice on certain words but other than that great job.
Hey Sean,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was very detailed while still being a short summary. The two step curriculum sounds effective to help students learn more about the stock market. Based on how detailed your pitch is, I can tell you are passionate about this idea. If I could suggest anything, it would be to convey that passion more in your tone and movements. Great pitch!
Hey Sean! Your elevator pitch idea was great and I believe your idea would be very useful, especially for the target audience you described which would be young investors who are simply too scared to put their cold hard cash into a market where they could lose it. However, I can say that I believe that instead of a textbook or e-book a website with informational videos where customers pay a set fee monthly would be more beneficial for the long run of your business, kind of like a Netflix encompassing the topics you deem most important for your idea.
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